I enjoy the concept of this piece. You had previously sent me a picture showing me your idea, and I liked that you connected with seeing this enough to take a photo of it and that it inspired you to make this piece. I like pieces highlighting simple everyday things that people often walk by with a second glance. The gestured shapes of the imprints of shoes are effective, and they show nice movement. A few darker confident marks would help to make them stand out more, maybe some white highlights with white Conte also could help to make them pop. I wish that the directional marks of the background were more sporadic I think the one direction flattens the piece. I enjoy the connection to TRU and showing multiple people on their own journeys in their own time; this works very well for the assignment.
Chloe M
I enjoy the concept of this piece. You had previously sent me a picture showing me your idea, and I liked that you connected with seeing this enough to take a photo of it and that it inspired you to make this piece. I like pieces highlighting simple everyday things that people often walk by with a second glance. The gestured shapes of the imprints of shoes are effective, and they show nice movement. A few darker confident marks would help to make them stand out more, maybe some white highlights with white Conte also could help to make them pop. I wish that the directional marks of the background were more sporadic I think the one direction flattens the piece. I enjoy the connection to TRU and showing multiple people on their own journeys in their own time; this works very well for the assignment.
– Chloe Murray