Jolie-Assignment 2-Death Brave Rot-Fall2025

Eyes are drawn to the women then to the skull. The detail makes the drawing feel complete though with the heavy detail filling most of the page the top right corner feels more plain, I would suggest maybe adding more of the plant in that area. Another thing I noticed is while the skeleton and women are highly detailed some of the parts of the plant or decay feels less finished and more like just line arts, they could use more detail added into it. The piece very clearly show elements of death and rot though I feel as though its needing something added to it to feel brave. The women’s lips seem to look as if she is in pain/sad perhaps a more calm expression would make her appear to be more brave looking.