Assignment 3: Reflection and Refraction

1. I am very pleased with the significant improvement in this final version of the assignment compared to the previous review. The proportion appears effective, with the objects centered appropriately; however, the cluster of objects and the shadowing could be slightly adjusted downward. I am comfortable with this adjustment, as not all artwork needs to be perfectly micro-centered, and this can be addressed simply by trimming a small portion of the blank edge if necessary.

2. The enhanced shading contributes to a stronger three-dimensional effect. However, as discussed in class, the outlines in this work should include a broader range of tonal variation to add more dynamism. The cylinder demonstrates the most appropriate tonal range, utilizing black and white effectively.
Overall, this is perhaps the most accomplished piece the student has produced in this course. Well done!